Thanks to so many comments I got on the first version of the pitch I'm entering in Shelley Watters Twitter Pitch Contest.
The original pitch is a couple of posts below. Here's the revision:
Title: "Any Fae May Apply"
Genre: YA Urban Fantasy
Word Count: 95,000
A snarky teen troll finds part of her job as Tooth Fairy is to stop a monster from killing kids. Even if other fae won't work with her kind.
Thanks for any comments or suggestions!