tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1841255975818338566.post8853789666289613672..comments2023-10-25T03:22:50.150-07:00Comments on Suzi McGowen: Unnamed Cryptozoology WIPTouch of Inkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13551995840395409781noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1841255975818338566.post-67878011835751729502010-06-15T20:23:51.413-07:002010-06-15T20:23:51.413-07:00Lol! And I followed you, because you write steampu...Lol! And I followed you, because you write steampunk! (I love your steampunk hat.) <br />Well, I also followed you because I love how you write about writing :)<br /><br />Thanks for the advice and good luck wishes. I'm thinking this WIP needs them :)Touch of Inkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13551995840395409781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1841255975818338566.post-20106107563085940872010-06-15T15:14:09.072-07:002010-06-15T15:14:09.072-07:00omgomgOMG - you have a cryptozology WIP??!
SQUEEE...omgomgOMG - you have a cryptozology WIP??!<br /><br />SQUEEEEE! <br /><br />That excited me so so much! I'm an amateur cryptozologist (so super amateur...) and i love it so much! it's so fascinating!<br />When i mentioned that i love cryptozology on my blog a few months ago, almost no one knew what i was talking about.<br /><br />Anyway, regarding your story. I think Rachel's conflict needs to be deep and personal. Yes preventing extinction is noble and endearing, but would she continually stake her life on it? For both Fox and the Winchester boys the reason they do it (and not neccessarily why they started it, but why they keep at it) is because it will lead them to reunite with a missing family member. That's a pretty firm conflict. If they walk away, they risk never seeing a family member again. If you can find a conflict like that for Rachel, then you're golden.<br /><br />Good luck!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.com