tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1841255975818338566.post2785904391230765427..comments2023-10-25T03:22:50.150-07:00Comments on Suzi McGowen: Another Blurb for A Troll Wife's TaleTouch of Inkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13551995840395409781noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1841255975818338566.post-39399634621269330832010-08-09T22:07:02.424-07:002010-08-09T22:07:02.424-07:00I really like this for your query. It's funny...I really like this for your query. It's funny, it shows your voice and the stakes are clear. I read the one at the top of your posts, I don't like it as much as this one. It's still good, I just think this one flows better. <br />Don't you wish someone would have told you how much this part of the writing process sucks?Jolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04630744737142051232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1841255975818338566.post-91428602032396140252010-08-08T18:12:30.645-07:002010-08-08T18:12:30.645-07:00I like the first version better for a blurb.I like the first version better for a blurb.Melissa Gillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02700191547004665402noreply@blogger.com